If you have yet to read J. Robert Lennon’s excellent short story, Breadman, in The New Yorker. Above, is the original manuscript for it. J. Robert explains:
This story came out much cleaner in the first draft than most of my stuff—I did some work to the beginning and end, and tweaked small things throughout. Then I went through a bunch of drafts with two editors and a copyeditor at the New Yorker. I think the first few pages were written on a laptop, then I switched to the notebook for the rest.
Please do yourself a favor and spend a few minutes with it right now.